[warmachine6]

I'm not a fan of the music , but that's just me being me....
Anyway things to perhaps consider
Lightning looks good although i did see flickers , now im not 100% sure if dont on purpose to get the RAVE feel.
Animation with the exception of figures without legs as in the female one try looking at walk cycles, sliding figures are okay .. but it might look nicer with a walk cycle, you could remove the floor and use the stud-ed floor for this , very handy for making animations with legos
look on youtube for Keshen8 and i think forrestfire101 there was another good one if i come across it on youtube i'll remember to post it, keep practicing ^_^